To update multiple values, you could also take advantage of reduce taking an already filled accumulator, and applying a function on that and every member of the following collection.
=> (reduce (fn [a k] (update-in a k inc)) {:a 1 :b 2 :c 3 :d 4} [[:a] [:c]])
{:a 2, :c 4, :b 2, :d 4}
Be aware of the keys needing to be enclosed in vectors, but you can still do multiple update-ins in nested structures like the original update in.
If you made it a generalized function, you could automatically wrap a vector over a key by testing it with coll?:
(defn multi-update-in
[m v f & args]
(reduce
(fn [acc p] (apply
(partial update-in acc (if (coll? p) p (vector p)) f)
args)) m v))
which would allow for single-level/key updates without the need for wrapping the keys in vectors
=> (multi-update-in {:a 1 :b 2 :c 3 :d 4} [:a :c] inc)
{:a 2, :c 4, :b 2, :d 4}
but still be able to do nested updates
(def people
{"keith" {:age 27 :hobby "needlefelting"}
"penelope" {:age 39 :hobby "thaiboxing"}
"brian" {:age 12 :hobby "rocket science"}})
=> (multi-update-in people [["keith" :age] ["brian" :age]] inc)
{"keith" {:age 28, :hobby "needlefelting"},
"penelope" {:age 39, :hobby "thaiboxing"},
"brian" {:age 13, :hobby "rocket science"}}