In short, you've stated the standard conventions well and you're not missing a lot. IMO, the only move that would make someone look unprofessional would be not having the Primary Key(s) first. Having the foreign keys come right after that is a nice convention, but not a big deal. (Multi-field primary keys that include foreign keys should of course be at the very beginining, or someone should be beaten.) I would add two additional thoughts:
- Have fields with similar themes near each other. Having City/State/Zip fields widely separated would be unhelpful, for example. I think it would not matter in the slightest whether user_role or user_ip came first, but they sound like they should be next to each other.
- Secondary to other such conventions, it doesn't hurt for things to be alphabetical.
Having additional conventions within your database is a very good idea (like as you mention always having the timestamp at the end). If you have ChangeDate and ChangeBy fields in a lot of your tables, having them (obvously next to each other and) consistently located is good.
Additionaly, ErikE mentioned that there can be some efficiency to having, at the end of your table, the variable length fields (varchar, nvarchar) that might often contain nulls. Other than that, I don't think there are any performance advantages to arranging things a certain way in modern relational databases.
Naming
Often when you're deciding column order is the same time you're deciding on column names, so I'd like to address that a little. You can certainly make horribly, costly mistakes with the naming of your fields; this is much more important than your column ordering. Ordering can be changed easily, but poor names will cause you problems forever. It's a huge pain to change table/column names a year later when there's dozen's of references to them. I just added an answer here to address this very important topic.